looking into eyes
of two faced stories
one side voice
two side pencil

mingled footprints
walk garden morning
glories bloom to wilt
in parallel journey

tracing echo words
with dull points
chasing sentence
beginning from end

soul speak counts
lead mind hides
one hundred tears
falling from sky

running color revealing
pellucid waters
voice inhaled word
word exhaled voice

swirled in puddle
splashed in echo
story made song
walking into the duet

Contributed to Open Link Night with dVerse Poets Pub. Happy to return with the fellow pub poets from the winter break and splendor in shared words again ❤ Please link up and show your support for this great group of people, you are sure to receive it back in kind.

3 thoughts on “Metanoia”

  1. one hundred tears
    falling from sky…was a really cool line that caught me…and how you played off of it in the last stanza as well…the swirling in the puddle, the one voice/parallel voices blending to a duet….

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